- What aspect of your project was working positively, and why?
Overall graphic works out nicely. Using gradient to analyzing the sun exposure is effective
2. What area of your work needs improvement?
The site diagram is lacking specificity and the icon of the sound is too generic. For the observation and analysis diagram, I should calculate the total amount of grey water usage by understanding how much grey water can a person produce everyday. The time diagram is a little bit confusing, I should not trying to merge two different categories information together.
3. Based on critique, how do you improve your approach toward diagramming?
Use more data to increase the amount of information I am covering. Be more thoughtful on the icons using.
4. Is there particular kind of diagram you want to learn in the second half?
I am interested in Axon/ Section Diagram about program distribution or material usage.
Assignment 3.0 and 3.1