1.) What aspect of your project was working positively, and why?
The graphics had an overall look to them that connected the diagrams. The diagrams have rich information and the graphics make it really clear to understand.
2.) What area of your work needs improvement?
I need to improve on the sun and shadow diagrams. They are kind of generic that all projects have, so the suggestion was to have diagrams unique to my project that show the exact sun information that is relevant to the park.
3.) Based on critique, how do you improve your approach toward diagramming?
Now I will look at all my diagrams as a whole and make sure they connect and tell the story. There should be an order of the diagrams as well.
4.) Is there particular kind of diagram you want to learn in the second half?
I had a suggestion to make a diagram that shows the different levels of trees and what kind of view you can get through each level.
Assignment 4.0 Final
Assignments 3.0-3.1 Edited
Assignments 3.0-3.1 First Attempt